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Writing Tips & Tricks – NaNoWriMo, No More Heroes, and Three Helpful Tricks for Planning A Novel

6/10/2016

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Fifty-thousand words in thirty days? No problem...
Hey, friends! Guess what? It's October, which means we're officially one month closer to National Novel Writing Month 2016 and it's time to start planning! Woo!

Some of you may or may not already know that No More Heroes started off as a pretty straightforward WriMo venture back in 2014. It was my first Nano and I was inspired to participate in part due to my friend Saf of Not Saf for Work – more specifically, I was spurred by my desire to write some more fun, action-oriented long-form fiction, following my experience doing a short, chaptered 'companion' story which was based off a superhero-themed WriMo Saf wrote way back in the day. Prior to No More Heroes I spent a great deal of time writing mostly one-off short stories which were stylistically very different to how No More Heroes​ ended up being!

For my first NaNo ever, I'm pleased to say I did pretty darn well! I was motivated and full of ideas and ended up hitting the quarter mark less than a week in, smashing the 50K goal in about 20 days, and finishing off the month with more than 62K under my belt. Sure puts the 8K postgrad thesis I took eight months to write into perspective, haha. Due to some of the rad winners' perks for that year I was encouraged to self-publish No More Heroes on CreateSpace, effectively making me the published author that I always wanted to be as a teenager.


However, even though I was brimming with inspiration, I definitely wouldn't have been as onto it as I was if I hadn't been prepared in advance. So for this blog post, I'm going to share three simple but helpful tricks that helped me get through my first (and second) NaNoWriMo/s. I know that planning is often a case of 'different strokes for different folks', but for those of you that do benefit from a little structure like myself (even though we might like to see ourselves as being improvisational and spontaneous), this list might be helpful for you! So without further ado...

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1. Get To Know Your Characters
I wrote a blog post a while ago called Three Quick Ways to Establish and Flesh Out Your Characters, which was – you guessed it – a little list of my favourite three tricks on character creation and development. If you haven't checked it out, give it a read! You might find something useful to you. This might seem like a really basic and obvious first point, but it's worth reiterating, especially when it comes to writing your character/s into situations of conflict, or scenarios where their flaws or vulnerabilities might make themselves apparent.

Beyond just knowing things like their primary characteristics, friends/enemies, likes/dislikes or fears, ask yourself questions like: what fundamental 'rules' does this character follow (ie. moral code)? How does this character react to stress? How do they behave when faced with a task or situation they might not be equipped to or want to handle? Once you have a good grasp on a character's behaviour patterns, it becomes a lot easier to both know what obstacles to throw them, as well as understand how they might (or might not) overcome them.

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2. Understand the Rules of your World
If you've ever been a DnD Dungeon Master or participated in a DnD campaign, you'll probably be familiar with this process. This will be a different experience for everyone. No More Heroes, an urban fantasy, was initially pretty close to the 'real world' as we know it, at least when it came to setting. As I continued to develop the lore behind my main mechanics though, the setting (and thus the rules) of the world shifted further and further into unknown territory, resulting in the substantially more unique universe that I ended up with in the final novel. I wrote a lot of notes on the "science" behind Abilities during my planning phase – science which I never really got into elucidating during the course of book, but which I'm hoping to be able to explore more in future stories in the Vigilante universe. 

By the way, by 'rules' I mean questions like 'what kind of influence does the setting have over your characters' and 'what kind of influence do your characters wield over their environment'. Is the core conflict of your story Man vs Man, Man vs Nature, Man vs Self, or something else entirely? I usually default to Man vs Man, but depending on where your novel sits on the reality/fantasy spectrum, you'll have your own particulars to consider in terms of what makes your setting work for your story. By understanding your world and the rules it follows, you can play with the challenges or advantages it presents your characters,  and what kind of physical, mental or societal limitations exist.

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3. Find Your Beats/The Three Act Narrative Structure
I'm going to admit up front that I have a kind of love-hate relationship with the ol' Three Act Narrative Structure. On the one hand, I hate the idea that all stories must follow a three act structure to be "good", because that's just not true. On the other hand, I really enjoy the substance that planning to the three act structure gives my long-form work, and knowing all my major turning points in advance really helps me pace out my story before November even starts. Gah!

But for real, the three act structure has been incredibly helpful for me. Being able to have a reference for which beats I should have where has allowed me to learn how to space out the events of my story and how to arrange them to work up to the pivotal climax of my novel. I have a specific fifteen-beat outline that I follow within the three act structure, which is a hybrid of an elaboration on the three act structure with a version of the Hero's Journey. After I've figured out what's happening and when, I separate my outline into chapters, which makes my workload a lot easier to parse. Also, it's really fun coming up with chapter titles.

And there they are. To be honest, these are all pretty simple points – not very groundbreaking or revolutionary at all! But all these plus ample advance planning time really do make a world of difference when it comes to a venture like NaNoWriMo. And of course, your story, your characters and your world rules may well change during the course of your writing – they certainly did for me, with some big ol' plot revelations and new ideas only dawning on me halfway during the month. But having a structure you can work off and pre-establishing even some of the above can really make for a much smoother ride all around, especially when time is not on your side.

If you have your own methods you like to employ when it comes to story planning, leave a comment and let me know! I'd love to hear about it. And as always, if you'd like to see the fruits of my labour, you can get your own physical or digital edition of No More Heroes from Amazon or Kobo.  In the meantime, all the best to all your NaNo'ers, old-hands and novices alike, and I hope you all have a good October and a productive NaNoWriMo to come! : )
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No More Heroes – The First Rule of Night Club (Short Story)

3/9/2016

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At the edge of the central district in the City Over, a dark-haired girl in a faded shirt and ripped jeans kicked open the back door of a club and stormed out into the night.

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Writing Inspiration – 'Mirror's Edge Catalyst - Real Life Time Trial' (dir. Claudiu Voicu)

28/8/2016

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I like to come back and watch this one every now and again – it's probably one of my favourite uses of first-person perspective in a parkour video. The lines are nice and long, the editing is slick, and it's got a good vibe to it. A pretty cool piece of work from both a parkour and filmmaking perspective, all in all.

No More Heroes isn't a dystopia, so running from law enforcement isn't as much a thing as it is in Mirror's Edge, but the thrill of the chase, and the intersecting of flow and fighting is something I can draw inspiration from for sure.
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Writing Music – 'Data Drift (excellum remix)' – Menthe

27/8/2016

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A yet-to-be introduced character in the universe of No More Heroes is an adrenaline-loving Vigilante who has a disability in common with 5% of the world's (that is, our world's) population. He's a big music junkie who loves post-rock and electronica the most., I imagine this would be one of his jams for when he's out on his nightly runs, looking for some action.
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No More Heroes – Official Book Trailer

26/8/2016

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​Official Site | Amazon | Kobo

The peaceful nights are kept under the clandestine and watchful eye of young, gifted vigilantes the world over. But a sudden rash of vigilante deaths heralds the arrival of a new and unfamiliar enemy - one whose motive is as unclear as their identity. Someone or something seems determined to disturb the peace, and they're going straight for the watchmen to do it. In a city where those who are gifted make up their own rules, who will step forward when the threat of a swift end is real and there stands so little to gain?

Soundtrack: 'CELESTIAL BODIES (feat. Jovani Occomy)' – GHOST DATA

Audio samples from Cowboy Bebop: Knocking on Heaven's Door (2001), Chocolate (2008), Righting Wrongs (1986), Dissidia: Final Fantasy (2008), Devil May Cry 3 (2005), Final Fantasy X-2: International + Last Mission (2003)
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Writing Music – 'Aching to Live' (The Spiritual Machines)

20/8/2016

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At one stage I could very vividly picture an incredibly dynamic cinematic film trailer for No More Heroes every time I listened to this song. Talk about powerful music.
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No More Heroes – Parkour, Freerunning & Flow (Video Playlist) + Book Excerpt

15/8/2016

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 At the end of this post is a link to a hidden page on this site with a short excerpt from Chapter 3 of No More Heroes. Stay tuned!

As someone within the local parkour/freerunning community, I never have to look very far for inspiration when it comes to movement. Even just within our local scene we have so much talent and diversity in style – it makes for a wellspring of creative stimuli, whatever you're doing. My repeated yet-unsuccessful attempts to do B-kicks and Aerials aside, I'm definitely more a parkour than freerunner practitioner, but if it's one thing I am pretty practiced at, it's observing others. Though my (currently) limited skillset probably begs to differ, watching others train at jams or gatherings has been both really helpful on a technical level, and extremely interesting from a creative standpoint. It's natural then with my love of dynamic action in fiction that I incorporated parkour and freerunning elements into No More Heroes... specifically, in writing characters who practice the discipline in their nightly escapades.

Straightening up and brushing the brick dust from his hands, he strode over towards the opposite end of the building and glanced out over the cityscape. [...] Adjusting the straps of his backpack, he began his run – light-footed steps over the bridges between rooftops, smooth traverses along the cables between buildings. A stride here, a precise jump there; slick lines across the breadth of the City stretching out from the centre of town towards its waking edges.

 – Chapter 5, Paradigm Shifts

The characters I speak of make up the secondary team of Vigilantes in the novel, and within their group they encompass some of the 'types' of practitioners you'll often find within the parkour and freerunning community. One is primarily a parkour practitioner; another is well-versed in both practices, but tends to incorporate more tricks into their movements; the third is learned in aspects of both, but is more casual in their approach and their use of either discipline. These three incorporate their practices into their Vigilante duties not just in terms of urban exploration and chase sequences, but also into their fighting styles, which – even in having three 'parkour superheroes' – made for some nice diversity within the team and their dynamics with each other.

I drew from many different sources (both real and fictional) when it came to writing the action scenes and moments in No More Heroes, but one of these aforementioned secondary Vigilantes I largely modelled after a practitioner I know, who regularly amazes and inspires me with their skill and approach to training. Their style of movement in particular is one I really love to watch – it's a strong, clean and confident way of moving, purposeful and steadfast. While there's a pretty clear distinction between their personalities, this practitioner was definitely a pretty strong influence on the way I ended up shaping and writing the Vigilante in question, just through their style of movement.

But that's enough of that for now! Below is a short playlist I created with some parkour and freerunning videos I like – in particular, I aimed to include ones that had some good examples of flow. If your parkour terminology is a little lacking, that's okay – you'll probably have a pretty good idea of what I mean after watching some of these. After you've had your fill of sweet moves, don't forget to check out the link to the excerpt of Chapter 3 of No More Heroes​ at the end of this post!
Thanks for reading, folks. If you're interested in seeing some of the parkour and freerunning action in No More Heroes for yourself, don't forget you can get it in print and digital editions either on this website, or from Amazon or Kobo. Enjoy the rest of your weekends!

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No More Heroes – Book Excerpt
Chapter 3: Crack the Earth

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Writing Inspiration – Freestyle Inline Skating (aka Freeskating) & The Existence of LED Wheels

14/8/2016

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I've been creating playlists by the handful for the No More Heroes YouTube channel lately, and yesterday I was looking up parkour/freerunning, longboarding and fixed gear etc. videos that would 1. Be useful research/inspiration material, and 2. fit the aesthetic of The City for a playlist of the same name.  Specifically, I was trying to find videos of the aforementioned at night, since most of No More Heroes is set during the dark hours. While I was trying to look for aggressive inline/freeskating videos (also set at night) I found out that LED wheels are a thing. Oh yes.

As a parkour practitioner I spend a lot more time on my feet than on wheels – but I guess I should have figured(?). Folks have light up wheels for their bikes nowadays, why not something similar for small wheels too? Sure made my search for nighttime videos a lot easier anyway. You can check out some of the freeskating videos I found at the playlist below!

​(By the way – some of those wheels can spark as well. Hella yeah.)
There aren't any freestyle inline skaters in No More Heroes, but there's definitely one who will be making an entrance in the next instalment. After this very educational research session, methinks I'll be giving them some of those LED wheels too. In the meanwhile, if you'd like to see any of the other movement disciplines I mentioned in literary form, don't forget to check out No More Heroes either on this website or on Amazon or Kobo. Have a good weekend, everyone!
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Writing Music – 'I May Fall' (Jeff Williams, RWBY)

13/8/2016

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One of the best-matched songs to a fight scene in RWBY, I feel. This one's definitely going in my writing playlist for future fight scenes.
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Writing Inspiration – The Bright Sessions (Podcast)

12/8/2016

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An audio drama about therapy for the strange and unusual.
 As well as posting content on the things that Inspired me past-tense while I was writing No More Heroes, I'm also going to be posting some of the things that I come across as I continue planning and writing more stories from the Vigilante universe. I haven't touched my second book draft since the end of NaNoWriMo last year, but the ideas have definitely still been flowing, moreso recently as I push my way through some plot issues I've been having. I've been gradually filling up the pages in the notebook I use to slam out ideas, and I'm feeling hype and hoping to be able to get back to writing proper soon!

In any case, onto the point of this post. I first listened to Lauren Shippen's The Bright Sessions a couple of months ago at the recommendation of a friend and (to use a Night Vale-ism) I fell in love instantly. Framed as a series of recordings largely from the office of the enigmatic Dr. Bright, it follows the lives and therapy sessions of a number of youths with unusual abilities. Not only is it a thoroughly engaging and all around damn-well produced podcast, but the youths-with-abilities aspect is particularly neat for me, as the writer of a story about youths-with-abilities myself! It's always awesome seeing how other creators with similar-yet-different ideas shape their stories and characters, and the way they choose to utilise, treat and describe superpowers within their respective universes.

For example – in the universe of The Bright Sessions, people with unusual powers are classed as Atypicals; in the universe of No More Heroes, those with Abilities (capital A), and specifically ones who choose to take to the night with them, are called Vigilantes. The Bright Sessions focuses on the influence of these abilities on the personal, day-to-day lives of its principle characters; No More Heroes focuses on the cast's use of their talents in the concrete jungle at night. But similarly, The Bright Sessions and No More Heroes both look at the way that the possession of these abilities/Abilities can affect the characters' psyche/mental wellbeing and personal principles, and both deal with the theme of learning to control one's powers and learning more about yourself as a person. Sure, No More Heroes might have a lot more parkour and punching, but in some aspects (even if they are small) there are some parallels, haha.

Real talk though, even if I had chosen to write a completely different novel (ie. sans the inclusion of superpowers), I'm honestly just really glad that this series exists. It's well-written, well-acted and my god if Lauren Shippen doesn't know how to craft tension and a good cliffhanger. If you haven't listened to it, here's the playlist for Season 1 below – you can also listen to them all on YouTube. And hey, if you already know and like The Bright Sessions and are looking for more youths-with-abilities content, then think about checking out No More Heroes – you can buy print or digital editions through this website (and get some bonus wallpapers with your purchase), or you can buy it from Amazon or Kobo.
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